Here's the full sequence. I followed the skill's framework, but I'm printing everything here and saving no files, as you asked.
Email 1: Day 0 (Tue-Thu, 8-10 AM)
Subject: Month-end at [Clinic Name]
Hi [Dr./First Name],
[One specific observation, e.g. "I saw [Clinic Name] has been serving [Town] since [year]" or "I saw you added [new service/associate]"].
Most small clinic owners I talk to wait over a week after month-end to see their numbers. For a 4-chair clinic in Ottawa, I cut that close from 12 days to 3. That meant faster answers on overhead, lab fees and collections.
I'm a bookkeeper who works only with small Ontario dental clinics. Would a quick look at how I did it be useful?
[Name]
[Phone] | [Website]
[Mailing address and unsubscribe line]
(About 95 words. The pain is the delay in seeing numbers, the proof is your one real result, and the ask is soft. The price is left out on purpose.)
Follow-up 1: Day 4-5 (value add)
Subject: Re: Month-end at [Clinic Name]
Hi [First Name],
One thing that cut the most time at the Ottawa clinic: [one tactic you actually used, e.g. "reconciling insurance and patient payments weekly instead of once a month"]. You can do this without hiring anyone.
If you'd rather hand it off, I do it for a flat 450 CAD/month. I'm happy to send a one-page summary of what the 12-to-3-day change involved.
Want me to send it?
[Name]
(Fill in the tactic with something true from that engagement. If you mention the price, keep it this light. You can also drop it and let them ask.)
Follow-up 2: Day 12-14 (breakup)
Subject: Closing the loop
Hi [First Name],
I've written a couple of times about getting month-end numbers faster at [Clinic Name]. Totally fine if the timing's off.
If bookkeeping becomes a headache down the road, you're welcome to reach out. Otherwise I'll stop filling your inbox.
[Name]
[Phone]
LinkedIn connection note
(Send around Day 2, between emails 1 and 2. This is 247 characters.)
Hi [First Name], I'm a bookkeeper working with small dental clinics in Ontario. I recently helped a 4-chair Ottawa clinic close its books in 3 days instead of 12. Thought it'd be good to connect with fellow [city/region] practice owners.
Notes before you send
- Placeholders: The only real facts are yours: the 4-chair Ottawa clinic, 12 to 3 days, 450 CAD/month and your specialty. Only add a clinic-specific opener that you verified on their website or Google listing.
- Reference client: Check that the client is fine with being described as "a 4-chair clinic in Ottawa". If you name them or say how they cut the time, ask first.
- Canadian law: The skill's checklist cites CAN-SPAM, but you're under CASL. You can email a business address without prior consent only if it's publicly listed with no "no unsolicited email" notice and your message relates to their role. Every email needs your name, mailing address and a working unsubscribe.
- Targeting: Send in small batches of about 20-50 clinics, each with a real personal opener. That reply rate is better than a mass blast.
- Diagnosing results: Low opens mean the subject line needs work. Opens with no replies mean the message or the ask needs work.
Test run for a freelance bookkeeper writing to dental clinics in Ontario. The model wrote one first email, two follow-ups and a LinkedIn note with placeholders and no invented facts. It also pointed out that the Skill's compliance checklist cites the US CAN-SPAM Act while the user is in Canada; its remarks on Canadian anti-spam law are the model's own and were not checked, so this is not legal advice.
できること
誰に書くのか(明確な理想の顧客像と、今まさに助けが必要だというサイン)から出発し、先に価値を渡すアウトリーチを組み立てます。メッセージが即削除される癖(自分中心の書き出し、誰にでも送る一斉送信、1通目からの押し売り、「その後いかがですか」だけの連絡、長文)を挙げ、4つのコピーの型(PAS、BAB、AIDA、一行版)と6つのテンプレートを示します。地元のサービス業、B2B SaaS、フォローアップ2通、フリーランスの提案、LinkedIn の接続リクエストです。メール、LinkedIn、SMS をまたぐ5回接触のシーケンス、弱点ごとの診断付き返信率の目安、到達率のチェックリスト(SPF、DKIM、DMARC、ウォームアップ済みの別ドメイン、送信上限、配信停止リンク)も含みます。
出力
初回メール、フォローアップ、最後の締めのメールの件名と本文、タイミングを示したシーケンス計画と改善点。
こんな場面に
1対1で見込み客に当たるフリーランス、代理店、小さな B2B チーム。ニュースレター、広告、サポート返信、紹介による接点には向きません。
低リスク:指示のみのファイルでスクリプトはありません。元のファイルになかった名前と説明のヘッダーを AIBars が足しました。それ以外は作者の文章です。引用される統計(返信率、コールドメールのリターン)は作者によるもので未検証、コンプライアンスのチェックリストは米国の CAN-SPAM 法を前提に書かれています。迷惑メールやプライバシーの規則は国ごとに異なる(カナダの CASL、EU の GDPR など)ので、送信前にお住まいの地域の要件を確認してください。フリーランスの簿記担当者を想定して一度試用し、プレースホルダー付きで事実を作らないシーケンスを書きました。カナダの法律に関する指摘はモデル自身のもので、法的助言ではありません。ClawHub の作者 staybased によるもの、MIT-0。